1 star! *
Author: Jordan Silver
Title: Tryst
She’s the eighteen year
old best friend of his only daughter, one look and he's hooked, but
going there might open up a shit load of problems he didn’t really have
time for. But her body haunted his dreams and his dick would give him no
peace until he got it what it wanted.
He’s older, loaded and hot; what’s a girl to do? I know what this girl will be doing….him. My girly bits have spoken loud and clear and as inexperienced as she was, she had no doubt she could more than handle the brawny tattooed hunk that all the girls were raving about.
He’s older, loaded and hot; what’s a girl to do? I know what this girl will be doing….him. My girly bits have spoken loud and clear and as inexperienced as she was, she had no doubt she could more than handle the brawny tattooed hunk that all the girls were raving about.
OH. MY. GOD. no.no.no. egh. What did I just read?
I can't describe how bad this was.
Daddy. Daddy. NO!
The dialogues were so simple, like a three year old had written them. The storyline was basically non-existent. The sex parts were weird and made me feel a bit nauseated. I think I threw up in my mouth a little.
The characters were shallow and selfish. Every single one of them.
It was so bad it was ridiculous. In the bad way.
And who the hell ate all the commas? Give them back.
Ugh. Now I have to go read something good to make it better.
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